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  • Hi, Bronys13 aka. Smith_11. It's me, BSoulstone from AO3. Just wondering whether we can further discuss your LWA fan series.

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    • Sure

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    • What u wanna talk about first?

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    • Not much so far in mind but, there are two questions about Little Witch Academia: The World of Witches I have in mind:

      A. What do you think will happen if Akko somehow managed to deduce Malum to be her biological father despite vague hints from Chariot?

      B. Does Akko in your fic not Japanese? I asked cuz you casted Madisyn Shipman, the American actress, as her.

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    • Akko would be able to dedcue Malum as her father, but she wouldn't beleive it until it's revealed to her.  Akko in the fic is japense but the movie page is just a visual for the story, but everyone in the fic has the same race as the anime.

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    • Do you wanna know how Sucy gets to come back?

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    • Yes. How?

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    • I can't tell you much, because i havent wrote it yet and it might take awhile for it to come into light. But it'll take a world tree to bring her back ;)

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    • But make sure to look out for the sequel, and no Sucy doesn't come back in the sequel

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    • That's bummer.

      Then, who will replace her in Akko's team assuming you won't change your mind? If you need my help in it, I only have two recommendations:

      1. Molly McIntyre

      2. An OC who is in form of one of Sucy's siblings (twin sister perhaps?). I got this idea from Teri Terio manga which established that she has siblings who resembles her. Two of them being Garie and Sabi.

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    • No one will, they will go on heir own adventures and live their lives

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    • Until the next team up of course.

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    • Check out the academia series on my profile and you'll see what im talking about

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    • You mean in The Academia Series? I guess I have to wait for the next team up then. But either way, whoever replaces Sucy, she won't able to fully fill the void.

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    • Bronys13 wrote: Akko would be able to dedcue Malum as her father, but she wouldn't beleive it until it's revealed to her.  Akko in the fic is japense but the movie page is just a visual for the story, but everyone in the fic has the same race as the anime.

      Back about Akko in your fic, since you said the characters' ethnicity remains same as with in anime canon, there are two Japanese actresses that I find fit for Akko's role better than Madisyn Shipman:

      A. Kamishiraishi Mone

      B. Miyabi Matsuura

      So, which one you interested with?

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    • B.

      But it'll be too much work to recast so ill keep the actor. But the is for the suggestions.

      Now would you like me to show you the plan I have for the series?

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    • I see.

      You don't have to re-cast everyone. Just some you find least fit after a consideration. And since the fanfic series is yours, it's up to you to decide. I simply wanted to suggest things I had in mind.

      And yes. Tell me your plan for your series.

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    • First, after the first story ill do about four stories in order of Sucy, Constance, Amanda, and Lotte. Then the team up sequel then a civil war based movie and then the final story.

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    • I see.

      Speaking about Akko's dad, Malum Arnold Kagari, how much you develop his character concept so far (you have yet to make his page at Movie Ideas Wiki)? Since you apparently still working on it, I have an interesting suggestion that might helpful:

      Haruhiko Yamanouchi

      Haruhiko Yamanouchi

      Taking into account of Chariot being French and Akko being Japanese descent, it will be make more sense if Akko's dad, Malum, is a Japanese man. However, he keeps his lineage a secret by using demonic power to give himself Caucasian appearance most of the time so his peers won't discover his relation with Akko through similarities in certain details of their facial features. So, whereas Mark Hamill portrays Malum in his Caucasian persona, his true, Japanese self should be portrayed by Haruhiko Yamanouchi.

      The concept of him portrayed by two actors supposedly allude how Darth Vader conceals his mask most of the time until he unveils his true, scarred face to Luke near the end of The Return of The Jedi. Although, this also came from Barago from GARO series who portrayed by two actors (one is his true, scarred self and his handsome alter-ego).

      What's your opinion about it? I didn't propose this to question your decision in having Mark Hamill portray Malum. The idea of him portrayed by two actors can be a good idea to increaae the impact of him revealing his true identity to his daughter Akko (he would've briefly show his true, Japanese face when he states that he's her father or something). Regardless, since this is your fic we're talking about, it's up to you to decide.

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    • Having a dual persona is a good idea, I'll explore it in later stories and I'll try to make sure it's in the next team up.

      The reason why I made Mark Hamill as my character is because I like how he voices his villains in Batman the animated series. And I am going to work on his wiki page soon, but in the meantime I wanna make sure that I get the stories fleshed out.

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    • But I wanna ask, how much do you know about Norse mythology?

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    • I'm decently familiar with such mythology thanks of studying from Norse Mythology for Smart People site. Thanks to it, I learned many things, such as Jötnar's origin, the dynamic between Gods of Asgard and Jötnar, and Ragnarök, the apocalyptic event that marks the end and rebirth of the world. Once I try to share and discuss it with someone when we worked for a fic but, he thinks of such thing as nothing but insignificant ********. Even if he had some interest in it, whatever he take on things based on Norse mythology proved not faithful to source material. Perhaps that's because he either has some distate it from start or developed it when I tell him things I learned.

      Note: Jötnar are actually Norse Giants, but I prefer to refer them as such cuz they are deities as much as Gods of Asgard instead of your traditional, storybook giants.

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    • Well thanks for the site. I need info on Norse myths to bring back Sucy. I won't tell you everything. Did you see the Mushroom Queen Page that I made?

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    • I did. That one focuses on how Akko sees Sucy's past, I presumed?

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    • Yes, Akko goes into Sucy's past for closure, wand their is more solo origins and stories for the characters as well. Makes sense right?

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    • Bronys13 wrote: But make sure to look out for the sequel, and no Sucy doesn't come back in the sequel

      I guess so.

      Still kinda wondering whether Sucy wind up come back to life at later part of your series or anything (you said you ought to look at Norse mythology for possible ways to bring her back despite your statement above, remember?). I mean, I saw instances of dead characters wind up resurrected not only to give them second chance, but also to deal certain situation only them can solve. Examples includes Jack Sparrow who got resurrected in the third Pirates of Carribean movie cuz the pirate alliance can only win against East Indie Companies with him around, or Optimus Prime's resurrection in Revenge of the Fallen movie is crucial to stop The Fallen.

      Or I just a bit confused and you meant to say I need to wait for two or three more sequels to see her return?

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    • What I meant was that the sequel the Mushroom Queen doesn't have Sucy coming back, she will come back, but she won't come back in the Mushroom Queen, she'll come back in the next team up, sorry for the confusion.

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    • So yes, you'll have to wait a few more stories to see her return

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    • Oh, yes. I see.

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    • Next questions:

      A. What's your opinion if Sucy's hidden left eye turns out to be a mechanical eye that allows her to detect certain discrepancies beyond regular human vision (ex. finding concealed enchantments/spells on items or other things)?

      B. Have you ever heard the term tokusatsu and magical girl genre?

      C. Have you ever watched Marvel Cinematic Universe's 2016 movie Doctor Strange? Just curious.

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    • A. Well, I don't like to turn characters into cyborgs, so no, but good idea.

      B. Sometimes, but not into it.

      C. Yes I have it's amazing.

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    • Bronys13 wrote: First, after the first story ill do about four stories in order of Sucy, Constance, Amanda, and Lotte. Then the team up sequel then a civil war based movie and then the final story.

      You mentioned that there's a civil war-based story in one of your sequel. How's the situation will look like? Would it had something to do with Sucy's return (if this is the case, that'll reminded me with Mordo's departure from Masters of Mystic Arts after unable to comprehend why Doctor Strange was forced to break the rule to undo Kaecilius and Dormammu's plan to consume Earth and revive those they killed (including Wong) in process)?

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    • Well it's civil war between Akko and Diana. Mostly political that turns physical.

      Cant talk about it all, because spoilers, but it'll be something that will let of the jealous anger that Diana has.

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    • Also I posted the new story on fanfiction and AO3

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    • Oh crap.

      And I'll check out your story, man.

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    • Just've read your story and can't wait for the next chapter. By the way, it seems you shipped Amanda and Akko, don't you? You made them lovers in your story.

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    • Yeah I shipped them, just a little romantic subplot. Too much Diakko in the fandom

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    • I see. Too many ship Diana and Akko as lesbian couple, so much that I decided to make a slightly different take for such ship in my fic.

      By the way, sometime ago I stumbled upon Japanese dub of The Empire Strikes Back's infamous scene where Vader reveals to Luke that he is his father. Turns out the performance much better than the original. You can check it out in the link below:


      https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=cbpslRxy8T0

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    • Ok I will.

      Also I'll explain to you the reason why I made this fic. I wanted to make each character and story more interesting for the readers. Akko in the anime, was written to fail, I even read a reddit post once that explained why Akko is one of the worst characters in LWA. So I wanted her to have some skill which is the reason why she has superintellence, to have some talent to make her more better.

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    • I supposed whoever wrote Akko as the worst character in LWA was either underestimated her abilities, being too bias to see/care with it, or both. I mean, although not to the same extent as in your fic, Akko in canon (both short films and anime TV Series) is much smartee than she let on. It's just her impulsiveness and discipline (as Diana noted) that made it harder to see it. Examples include able to formulate majorities of Happy Time Project and Trick Or Treat plan by her own, able to inspire others to be better through Andrew, and not immediately fall into Woodward's trick in episode 11.

      Your plan of making her smarter and subsequently more badass reminds me to similar plan for Akko in my fic series Little Witch Academia: Witches of Midgard, which set after Episode 25: After the quest for Grand Triskellion, Akko become much more mature despite retaining her impulsiveness, and even managed to keep up with her peers in many things (including in broom flight). She also much more eager to study as much as she thinks some of Luna Nova's subjects being boring thanks of being able to fly with her own power for real as shown by the end of episode 25

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    • It's always about how you write your characters.

      But I'm glad you read the first chapter of my new story. Thank you. Also I'm getting into Doctor Who. But I'm writing the next chapter soon, I hope I don't procrastate much.

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    • You're welcome.

      Other thing that made Akko in my fic series Little Witch Academia: Witches of Midgard very badass (more or less as badass as in yours I supposed) is that she descended from a family of formidable yet obscure samurais who shares her surname. Outnumbered by their rivals, the House of Kagari must rely on greater skill, cunning, and loyalty to one another to make up their shortcomings. In addition of being resourceful, the House of Kagari developed martial art techniques unique to them allowing each of their warriors to match ten of their enemies in strength. One such technique is Kagari Style Archery Techniques, archery techniques passed down through generations of the family. Daryl Cavendish, who learned about their existence from her peers despite limited records about them and has no interest in non-magical families in general, became intrigued by Akko and House of Kagari because of it, citing that her ancestors indeed have everything they need to become more than nobody everyone perceived them as despite choosing not to in the end.

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    • That's the character development that deserves to be in the show or at least in the third season. It'll make Akko way better for everyone.

      To take a break from LWA, have you heard about Doctor Who?

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    • And also how she able to relate with Diana more, even with her little interest in tradition

      And about Doctor Who, I vaguely know some stuff about it. However, I do familiar with Daleks, infamous tank-like racist alien race that sought world domination, I think.

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    • I'm going to make a time Lord OC, as you know, in the series when the doctor is inquired or almost killed he regenerates he heals, but his overall personally and physical form changes as well, like race, height, and even gender. So I'm going to make my doctor who OC.

      On a side note, Akko in my fic being successful just by being herself can make Diana more jealous. The reason being is because Diana in the show is jealous of Akko only a little bit, but in my fic she is jealous alot.

      Also I had the idea to turn Akko into a Villians so I wrote this fic: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/13415517/1/Akko-Kasgari-Possession

      Check it out, it's pretty good.

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    • I've checkes out the Possession fic some time ago and take a peek at the final chapter upon figuring out you have finished it finished. It freaked me out to see Akko, who have bonded with Evos taking over the whole Luna Nova like that, which looks like someone who takes over others' company by force.

      By the time you read this message, I reached the Chapter 7 of Akko Kasgari: Possession and was shocked to see Evo, the bad guy in your fic, replaced Croix in terms of role in tricking Ursula aka. Chariot to handicap her audience and nastier than the latter.

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    • Yup, the fanfiction mostly freaked everyone out. Its one of my most successful fanfictions, I'll transfer it over to AO3 soon. Thank you for reading it.

      Im now watching Attack of the Clones and starting to write the next chapter.

      If you have any more questions just ask me

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    • Did it?

      Well, talking about Akko becoming evil, I find a fic with similar which you may or may not familiar with called "The Black Comet":

      https://archiveofourown.org/works/20779430/chapters/49380005

      You ought to check it out as well. Although ongoing, it shows more humane side of Finnelan as the fic has a take to explain why she behave like a jerk as we know it.

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    • Oh, by the way, regarding Evos, does he really a demon? A dark god? Or both? Just to make sure cuz I consider to make a little homage of him in my fic or something.

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    • Well there are evil gods in myths condiered to be demons mind you, but Evos is a dark God with demonic intentions.

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    • I've checked out your OC and he/she is an intriguing character. To see him having 7 regeneration, does it means that guy have reincarnated for six times already or something?

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    • Yes. When the character almost is near death he regerates and changes his form into a new person. Like in Doctor who.

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    • Or a Phoenix except they chose to take a new identity instead of retaining old one?

      By the way, I recalled you made a page about Akko Kasgari: Possession in Little Witch Academia Fanon Wiki (which link you can see below) and you forgot to update it. So, I decided to help a bit and I hope you don't mind with that:


      https://little-witch-academia-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/Akko_Kasgari:_Possession

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    • Thanks, I think my internet is slow because I don't see an edit. But thank you for the contribution.

      I might make a story on Thecy but later...

      Also I made a step schedule for my fanfictions. Basically I'll work on a chapter for two days and a one day break. It'll be perfect to motivate me for my writing.

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    • Also I don't see that much changes to the page, but you did add it on mature.

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    • I posted a new chapter yesterday, I hope you read and liked it. 

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    • I did, and it wasn't disappointing.

      As I said in my comment at that fic, I can't help but feel bad to see how Such became she is now. Things could've avoided had she found someone who cared with her soon enough.

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    • Anyways, have you ever read a Sucy X Akko fic titled "A Mushroom Boquet"? That one shed the light of Sucy's backstory which not so different with yours, albeit with noticeable differences:

      A. Whereas your fic said Sucy is dying from a cancer, A Mushroom Boquet has Sucy possessed a cursed left eye that she forced to conceal all the time with her hair.

      B. A Mushroom Boquet's Sucy had two close calls to become a serial killer as worse as your fic's Sucy, but managed to avoid such fate thanks to Ramzan and later, Akko.

      If you got interested, you can read it here:

      https://archiveofourown.org/works/20152618

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    • Yeah I read it, it's awesome. Similar to mine but mine is much darker.

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    • The last chapter for the Mushroom Queen is coming, then I'll work on our favorite short inventor

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    • You say that.

      And I'm looking forward for both the final chapter of Mushroom Queen and Constanze-centered sequel of your fic!

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    • Speaking of Constanze, will it revolve around her past? And does Constanze had her soul transferred/bonded to her Stanbot sometime during her childhood in your fic series?

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    • Yes it's about her past

      And no, but it's something more darker than that

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    • Oh, ok.

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    • Looking back at Akko Kasgari: Possession, did you take some notes from Episode 11 of Little Witch Academia TV Series (one where she confronts the Blue Moon Spirit) as well? I mean, in both that fic and said episode, Akko finds herself given a deal by immensely powerful being to be better at a price that clearly not pretty, yet the outcomes were contrasting one another; whereas Akko in that episode rejects Blue Moon Spirit's offer, she accepted Evos' deal in your fic instead.

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    • It's been awhile since I've watched the series, might have to look back at it soon. So not really, I've kind of need a rewatch of the series. But Akko in the fic was more werry, in the series she cared for her friends when she was making the deal. But in my fic, she had second thoughts, she realized what her friends and what everyone in Luna Nova thought about her so she accepted the deal for a change, since she had that realization

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    • New chapter up now

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    • I just did.

      Did you read Teri Terio Manga of Little Witch Academia? The mention of a castle that used to be Sucy's home reminds me to Manbavaran manor from the same manga

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    • Cool. I haven't seen the manga. How did you like it?

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    • It was a nice conclusion for Sucy's backstory. Sad? Yes. But it does made sense not only to tell why she became a serial killer, but also shows how miserable her life than it seemed to be. It broke my heart to see Diana didn't share the same sympathy towards her as much as Akko (if TV Series Diana is in her place, it would be another story).

      For Terio Teri manga chapter that explained Sucy's background and family, here's one of its links;

      https://manganelo.com/chapter/little_witch_academia/chapter_4

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    • Thanks, it was a good read.

      What do you know about Constance?

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    • Speaking about Constanze, let's start from her background:

      It appears that she was either adopted or her mother had married a different person when she was young, judging from her family photo when she was a child in episode 18. In AnimeExpo 2017, Studio Trigger staff proposed that her soul had been transferred/bonded into one of her stanbots to keep her alive due to a certain terminal illness, the same stanbot Akko inadvertently destroyed in episode 18. Such proposed backstory however, best to be rule out as a joke as it clearly established her as an undead, specifically a Lich (undead wizard/witch who bonded his/her soul with certain object to attain immortality); and that the damage Akko done on her said stanbot should be more than enough to kill her on the spot. Instead, our adorable engineer only pissed by the aforementioned mishap.
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    • So Constance is a bigger mystery than Sucy. I feel like that I can take some notes from this, but not the whole thing. I have something new.

      First off, is she mute or selective mute?

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    • I supposed it's selective mute. I mean, she talks at the end of Episode 25 where her only line was, "She flew.", right when Akko managed to fly. It's easy to overlook.

      Oh, and someone who made a fanfic titled "Sucy, You Shrunk Me!" (see the link below) theorized that she can speak, but is prone to stuttering that she resorted to talk via. other means;

      https://archiveofourown.org/works/14475933/chapters/33439449

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    • Also about Constance, her family, how did be become a witch? I have multiple ideas for that.

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    • Regrettably, that was something I yet to figure out. When I worked on Constanze's iteration for my fic Little Witch Academia: Witches of Midgard, I mostly faithful to her canon counterpart by not discussing much of her family.

      Anyways, can you show me your ideas for her background in your fic series? Who knows if I can choose or evaluate which one that suit your fic's settings best.

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    • Well, Constance is familiar with magic, so ill make it where her family is from magic, but hates it. Not to mention that she uses machines so...I'll put that in their as well. Her parents will be overprotective, but that's all I can say. No spoilers.

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    • If that's your plan for Constanze's family, perhaps it's best that they should be a little more tolerant to set them apart from Akko's uncle and aunt. I mean, they kinda supportive to their daughter's magic-mechanics (as long as its magic aspects less obvious) but underestimated both what she can do and how she will be able to handle herself at the same time — a contrast of Akko's aunt and uncle who utterly against their niece's gift.

      How's that sound, Brony13? The decision lies in your hands since it's your fic series.

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    • I'll make the love machines, but not magic. In my universe in my fic, magic is debated rather than accepted. But it's coming soon...what about your series?

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    • Oh, ok.

      It's still in rewriting process, but I made a progress or two in improving it.

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    • Cool, I'll read it when your done. As you've done for my stories.

      Also I never fully saw Avatar the last Airbender

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    • Curious question: Will Croix show up in your fic?

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    • Well, Croix is the only character that I dont know well or figure to put in. But if I can work around it. I can place her in somewhere.

      Any cast member options for her?

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    • So far I only have one that suit Croix's role best: Cameron Esposito

      https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cameron_Esposito

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    • Thanks!

      Im writing Mechanical Marvel now, it should be done and published soon, so be on the look out.

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    • Yep.

      And I saw you made a page about Sucy Manbavran and Little Witch Academia: Mechanical Marvel here as well. When will you finish them?

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    • Around when the first chapter of the new fix comes up.

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    • New chapter up

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    • Just've checked out your fic and it looks like Akko will have Constanze as her little sister figure, which even neat.

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    • Next questions:

      A. How and why Diana in your fic series became a snob seemingly worse than in short films? Just curious cuz as worse as she can be, short film Diana might too pragmatic to try to attack Akko from behind and will likely let Hannah and Barbara do her favor instead, I think.

      B. Back about your fic "Akko Kasgari: Possession", did you based Evos on a certain mythological figure? Or any fictional character? Or you just came up on your own? I can't help but curious about it.

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    • A. Diana is mostly better as a snob, her change in the series is good, but her being mean to Akko only make Akko seem more better.

      B. I came up with Evos on my own. Something that I made that can be a part of the fic.

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    • I see. It kinda reminds me to among things Yoshinari regretted for TV Series: Diana in TV Series should be harsher as with in your fic and short films before befriending Akko.

      And as for Evos, you know what I found a bit funny about him? Perhaps because you stated that one of his monikers being The Pitch Black, I imagined him resembling the main villain of the same name from Rise of the Guardians.

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    • If Akko and Evos fighting each other and Evos is not possessing anyone, what chance does Akko have to win?

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    • Alot.

      Evos is only storng through a willing host

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    • I see.

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    • Anyways, I have a "What if?" question regarding your fic "Akko Kasgari: Possession": Imagined that Akko rejected Evos' proposal but Evos still possessed someone anyway. Who do you think that person will be?

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    • I don't really know, because no one is as insecure as Akko

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    • I think I know one, but she is a minor character.

      By the way, how's Malum organization in your fic looked like?

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    • Like cultists or hunters

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    • I see. Then, how organized the group it is? I mean, does the group's memberships being divided into ranks like a militaristic factions sucb as Captains, Generals, or Acolytes?

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    • The ranks are only followed by the servents and hunters at the bottom, while the leaders are at the top. Like Malum. I haven't gone into detail into it.

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    • Oh, okay. If you need help in that, just let me know.

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    • Have you ever watched 2013 film The Wolverine? Just curious cuz the film featured Haruhiko Yamanouchi who played Ichirō aka. Silver Samurai.

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    • Nope, I have seen wolverine origins

      Also new chapter up

      PS I like Deadpool better

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    • Actually, I'm referring 2013 sequel "The Wolverine", which featuring Logan aka. Wolverine got to Japan to visit only to get more than what he bargained for. In fact, that movie was what gave me an idea of proposing Akko's dad in your fic series being portrayed by Haruhiko Yamanouchi for his true, Japanese self while Mark Hamill portrayed his Caucasian alter-ego. Alternatively, you can check out this YouTube video to see why I suggested Haruhiko Yamanouchi in the first place.:

      https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=jOKzFKy9opk

      Got it. I'll check it out soon!

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    • Just've read it, and it's darker than I thought. But for the same reason, I got two questions:

      A. Will Constanze able to regain her voice?

      B. Will Constanze's dad return as one of main villains in your fic? For some reasons I find his actions in removing his own daughter's voice heinous enough to be his origin story as a villain, I think.

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    • A. I think that her voice will be gone, but it's possible in the later stories to get it back.

      B. No, he won't return as a Villian, he made a mistake, he's not a bad guy.

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    • So, what will happen in the final chapter of Constanze's story? Can't wait for the next and final chapter.

      I terribly sorry if I sounds not so patient. Maybe this has something to do with stumbling upon several LWA fanfics that ended up in hiatus in the middle of a cliffhanger that left unresolved, uncertain which Constanze's or Sucy's whose backstory being worst, or both

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    • It's ok, the final chapter will come soon. And I hate uncompleted fanfictions, makes me feel mad.

      Also you'll have to read and find out for yourself ;)

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    • Thank you for understanding. And I will.

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    • Next questions:

      A. In your LWA fic series, you established that Shiny Rod is a magical artifact of alien origin. Does it mean the staff was forged by a certain extraterrestrial being that can use magic like witches do? Can Shiny Rod in your fic transform into a suit of armor?

      B. Have you ever heard magical girl franchise titled Puella Magi Madoka Magica?

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    • A. I haven't thought about the suit thing that far ahead, but yes, the Shiny Rod is made by aliens.

      B. Nope

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    • I see.

      It's okay if you haven't heard of that series. However, Puella Magi Madoka Magica is my least recommended anime series cuz despite as dark as your fic, it's mostly about cynicism and hopelessness, so much that lighthearted moments barely exists. Or, should I say too much angst. But if you curious to watch it, be careful. Once you see how hopeless things in that series' lore and storyline, it may going to screw you up for life.

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    • Back about Shiny Rod, have you considered how and what aliens who created them looked like? I think I can help you in that.

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    • Sure, give me some examples, I'll take that into account for the later story.

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    • So far I only have one, which inspired by stories of ancient aliens (aliens' alleged role in shaping the history of mankind):

      Solais: A legendary yet obsure ancient extraterrestrial race that helped shaping the history of magic community on Earth. Through their connection with Shiny Rod, it's implied that they came from one of the star systems that make up Big Dipper and excel in combining magic and technology. During the Great Age of Magic, three of them, the magic-scientists Alkaid, Mizar, and Alioth, made contact with humanity after they crash-landed at the region thay became known as Arcturus Forest. Intrigued by witches' use of magic, the Solais trio established a peaceful relation by sharing them some of knowledge pertaining magic and technology used by their (Solais race) people, hoping that their newfound allies could help them return to their homeworld. Although they could never restore their crashed spaceship, the Solais trio nevertheless managed to craft a replacement ship out of both its salvaged remains and magic used by their witch allies. As a token of gratitude, Alkaid, Mizar, and Alioth entrusted witches some of their artifacts that could help them in times of need where among said artifact being the Shiny Rod.

      What do you think?

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    • Detailed, this is great!

      But I don't wanna take your idea.

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    • You don't have to, since we're talking about your fic, not mine.

      Regardless, I hope the idea I proposed still helpful considering I took some notes from canon: In addition of being an ancient tool, Shiny Rod in canon is implied to be a power manifested from very Big Dipper itself. As such, I named 3 aliens in my proposal above (Alkaid, Mizar, and Alioth) after three stars that make up Big Dipper.

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    • When I was about to post my message above, I just realized something I have asked yet: Will Nine Olde Witches show up in your fic?

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    • No, because even in canon, no one knows about them at all, just Woodward and Beatrix Cavendish. Plus in my world, in the fic, magic just comes into the world, not from anything else.

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    • Oh, ok.

      Anyways, what's your opinion regarding Little Witch Academia short films? Not sure if it's coincidence but, for some reasons I find your fanfic leaned more to short films continuity instead of anime TV series one, likely through Diana being as snobbish as her short film iterations and Sucy revealed to have family who lives at a castle leaned more to in Terio Teri manga, which set before the first short film.

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    • The series go in more depth.

      But the short films are more simple.

      But I like both

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    • Final chapter is out. Amanda O'Neill is next

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    • Just've read the concluding chapter of Constanze's story arc and turns out you were right about Constanze's dad. He's not a bad person and wanted to be normal, but what he did still unforgivable at worst.

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    • Do you have a plan or two for Jasminka's own story arc like Constanze's?

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    • I'm neutral to Jasminka, I won't make a story for her. Plus, I made a chapter publish date for most of these stories.

      Anything you know about Amanda?

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    • Amanda in canon is an unruly and fun-loving delinquent with kleptomaniac tendency to boot, but nevertheless cared with her friends. According to the official panel of Little Witch Academia at AnimeNEXT 2017, she hailed from a wealthy family whose former matriarch (Amanda's great-grandmother) was a powerful fortuneteller. Using her abilities, her family prospered in growing their business empire, but with the loss of such an advantageous ability, Amanda's family forced her to enroll at Luna Nova in order to make her a fortuneteller as well in order to keep said company prosperous. Obviously, Amanda wasn't exactly thrilled with such idea and became rebel she is now.

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    • Huh, never knew that about her. Why does a rebel like her do all of those things. Even do magic in the first place. But thanks. I'll put that into consideration.

      But also to inform you, the Amanda story is not only an origin story, but a continuation of the story from before. The main plots points after the origin in the story drives the plot forward.

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    • Ooooo. Interesting

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    • It's shown multiple times through the other stories, Mechanical Marvel takes a few seconds after Mushroom Queen and etc.

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    • New chapter is up

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    • Just've read it, and the flashback about Amanda's family is going to be in the next chapter, right?

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    • Yup

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    • I'll check it throughly later.

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    • By the way, I just've checked out the new chapter of your Amanda-centered fic and is unsure whether her case was worse than Constanze's. But one thing is certain: Neither her parents are real family. I said this because of her mom's action which nothing more than self-fulfilling destiny, if not proving herself a hypocrite: She blame her own misfortunes to her illegitimate daughter and had long disowned her on the very day Amanda runaway from home.

      You know what I mean, right?

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    • Yup that's what I was writing about!

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    • Will Amanda meet her mother once again in the concluding chapter as with Constanze? I wonder that if she does, probably it's even better if Amanda's friends called her out for her hypocrisy.

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    • We'll see, but did you read the rap battle?

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    • I did, and judging from its lyrics, the whole rap battle must be making fun against one another, I presumed? It's quite neat.

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    • Thanks, what are your favorite lines from each rapper?

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    • I think I'm gonna support Akko.

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    • Looking back at Akko and Constanze's backgrounds in your fic so far, I find Akko's uncle and aunt not so different with Constanze's parents as they disapprove their gifts (Akko's intelligence and Constanze's discovery of mixing magic and technology). Constanze's parents just wanted to be normal (albeit with questionable extent), but how about Akko's uncle and aunt? Did they against her high intelligence had something to do with Malum's descent into villainy (Chariot indicated them to be his parents in The World of Witches when she told her daughter the truth)?

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    • Yes, Malum is smart and ambitious and they were worried if Akko us going to do that as well

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    • Then about Akko's high intelligence, does she inherited it fro Malum? Or the result of underwent an experiment or two by her own father much to Chariot's fury?

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    • Malum self experiments on himself and gains super intelligence, he has Akko with Chariot and there you go.

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    • Also the last chapter of Flight should be ready tomorrow

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    • Got it.

      Did you take a note or two from 2003 film Hulk? One of plot points of that movie is David Banner conducted some illegal experiment onto himself, resulting anomaly that he biologically passed into his son Bruce and subsequently allowed him to survive exposure to fatal dose of gamma radiation as such anomaly endowed him the ability to turn into the brutish titular hero.

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    • Not really, but thanks for the note. I really like referencing movies. Also the new chapter is up

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    • Just've read it, and I find something that piqued my interest: Does the branch Akko abd Amanda secured from Malum base was Grand Triskellion? Or something that served as its homage?

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    • Nope, something more different. Alternate universe

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    • So, what is that stick?

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    • Patience...the next story will come soon...you'll find out soon enough

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    • Just've read your next story which focused on Lotte. Um, how will you portray her family? Would it as depressing as previous ones?

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    • No, it'll be more happier, and the flashback would be more shorter than the others

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    • That's a nice change. Too much dark and depressing elements won't bode well to a story's quality, even in fanfics.

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    • Thanks, I'll start the new chapter tomorrow

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    • A new chapter is up, When the last chapter of the final origin story ends, It's time for the next team up story

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    • Can't wait for the final one about Lotte, man. I wonder how the battle against those demons looked like.

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    • Now, the title of the next team-up story is called. The World Tree

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    • Ooooo

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    • Any questions?

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    • How will the story looks like? Have you made a synopsis of it in mind?

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    • There will be nine chapters for each of the nine worlds on the tree, the group has to stop Malum and the rest of his followers from starting Ragnarok and bring back Sucy

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    • Ooooo, interesting.

      Now I started to wonder whether reviving Sucy going to be a crucial part in their mission like how Jack Sparrow resurrected due to him needed to complete pirate alliance against Beckett's forces.

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    • Yup it will be. Interested?

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    • Of course. Can't wait to see how it turns out to be. XD

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    • New chapter is up

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    • I'm starting the chapter today

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    • Sorry for the late reply. I'd read the final chapter of your Lotte-centered fic and got a neat foreshadowing of it (the Grand Triskellion-like branch you mentioned indeed the branch of Yggdrasil itself).

      And for the chapter you startes, are you referring the first chapter of The World Tree?

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    • Yes it'll take place Midgard

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    • The new story is out

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    • How u like it

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    • Yup.

      While stopping Malum is one thing but, I worried how things will go as Diana seemed to less than thrilled by the idea of joining the gang in stopping him, let alone bringing Such back to life.

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    • Yup.

      While stopping Malum is one thing but, I worried how things will go as Diana seemed to less than thrilled by the idea of joining the gang in stopping him, let alone bringing Such back to life.

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    • By the way, I got 2 question:

      1. How will Malum trigger Ragnarok? Is it through awakening/disturbing Nidhogg, the infamous dragon that chewing on Yggdrasil's roots?

      2. How come Malum Arnold Kagari shared his name with the organization he lead (Malum)? Was it a coincidence in your fic's story proper?

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    • I haven't wrote how we would start it yet, but good idea!

      He changed his name to Malum when he joined

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    • Oooo, interesting.

      Does he also somehow change his originally Japanese visage to Caucasian one as well (one that should be resemble Mark Hamill)? I felt it would be adding more impact if that's the case as we previously discussed.

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    • Kind of I haven't wrote that yet, also the new chapter is out

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    • New chapter is up

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    • Just've checked it.

      By the way, can you explained what kind of person Diana in your fic portrayed as? For a second I thought her personality is based on her short film iteration, only for me no longer sure through her unwisely revealing Akko's status as Malum's daughter in front of angry dwarves. Does that jerk move kinda out of character? Or I just confused

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    • Her personality is based on the short film, making her more of a snob

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    • I see, thought your iteration of Diana in your fic seemed less wise than in short film from what I saw.

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    • Yeah, also new chapter is up

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    • Close tothe end

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    • Yup. Already read it yesterday.

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    • Plus the next story will be interesting

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    • Just's read the final chapter of The World Tree and glad to Sucy returned. Judging from how she got back however, she surely got better body than the one she had before her death (one that lacks the previous' cancer and importantly, consecrated that she's a lot stronger and faster than ever).

      Am I right?

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    • Yes

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    • The next story will have Croix and time travel

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    • Read the story?

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    • I did read the first chapter and despite short, it's quite neat. Although, given to your new story's premise, I felt I might going to read the rest of its chapter after all of them came out due to possibility of some of them ended with cliffhanger.

      By the way, do you know what cliffhanger is?

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    • Sorry if I post this here, but i need the help of the both of you to deal with the spammers/vandals/sockpuppets in this wiki.

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    • Wazzupguys wrote: Sorry if I post this here, but i need the help of the both of you to deal with the spammers/vandals/sockpuppets in this wiki.

      My suggestion regarding dealing sockpuppets and other trolls is report them to VSTF in the link below. Don't try to reason or communicate with them at the slightest. That'll be a huge mistake.

      https://vstf.fandom.com/wiki/Report:Vandalism

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    • Yes I do

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    • How is the story?

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    • Chapter is up

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    • Sorry for the late reply.

      Not to expect things went downhill in the chapter 2. I even find Anime! Diana won't approve what her counterpart in your fic just did.

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    • Yup, and that cliffhanger

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    • Curious questions:

      A. How does Gregory to go back in time for Diana?

      B. Is it okay if one of OCs in my fic series Little Witch Academia: Witchee of Midgard has some similarities with Sucy in your Academia series background-wise (being raised in an orphanage that hate her, figuring out her family had killed each other among other things)? I asked cuz I find your iteration of Sucy in your fic series as interesting as in canon franchise

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    • A. He used a spell to go back.

      B.Sure

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    • Interesting. I wonder how it looks like.

      Thanks. I'll make sure whatever similarities between the background of your Sucy and my said OC won't be too much.

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