User blog comment:FranceSwitzerland/Proposal: Movie Improvements/@comment-33046846-20170615142145

The idea isn't TOO bad, and it does seem like something that would be an addition for a wiki about fanon, such as this one.

However, the reason I'm not too thrilled with this idea is that the one you made is pretty short and does not contain a lot of information. It just jumps to the scenes that the creator is improving. This might be confusing, since there are definitely going to be people who never watched the movie. So, it could use some expansion, such as a section of what happens in the movie (like a synopsis or shorter version of plot, it doesn't have to be a whole lot, just a bit longer than what a synopsis would be for a movie idea on this wiki).

The way it's written isn't very clear as well. If you don't know what I'm talking about, it is written in 1st person. "I" and "you" are used, so it seems like it is referring to a certain person. I think it would be better if these articles (and every other article) is written in 3rd person, with the exception of an author's note, or something. I feel like it should be written, like any article, in accordance with our Manual of Style. The first one might turn into a chain of this.

Lastly, the article isn't categorized very well. There are large headings for every scene that wants to be changed. I don't exactly think that scene content is the only thing to revise in a movie, there are other things, like maybe a cast, soundtracks, characters, etc. Of course, you don't have to add these to yours, it's just some additions I thought of to make the improvement have more information and better categorization, since as for now, there seems to just be a large heading for every improvement. There is also one category used for this. I don't have many ideas for other categories that can be used, but if you have some, that's fine.

These issues, however, are not very major, and are somewhat minor. So, this lead to this vote:

If you can elaborate a bit more in the blog and fix some of these issues, I can maybe give a higher vote.