Thread:FranceSwitzerland/@comment-27143427-20170624105810/@comment-27061647-20170626090814

Hi FS, I will create my scene here:

In the begin of the movie, Ben Grimm meets Alicia Masters and his father Philip Masters. They meet each other because their fathers work in the same organization. Alicia and Philip are also interested in what Ben and Reed are creating. On the time they start to come visit where Ben and the others are creating the quantom gate, There goes something wrong. An explosion follows and Philip and Alicia are too scared and both go away.

Later, when Reed, Ben, Johhny and Susan have their powers, They meet Philip and Alicia again, during their search for Doctor Doom. They are both angry on them about what they did. Philip which calls himself Puppet Master now, has made some puppets. He also made one of Mister Fantastic. Puppet Master attacks Mister Fantastic, Invisible Woman and Hujman Torch. Some other puppets attack them too. Sue and Johhny start fighting against them. Mister Fantastic and Puppet Master fight against their each other. Puppet Master is stronger and defeats Mister Fantastic. Mister Fantastic is taken hostage by Puppet Master. The other fake puppet Mister Fantastic of Puppet Master comes in his place. Alicia also fights against the Fantastic Four, Unitl she sees The Thing. She sees something in him. Alicia can kill Human Torch, but she doesn't do it and attacks Puppet Master now. Puppet Master is angry about her betrayal and goes away with his Puppets.

Later back in Fantastic Four base, The Fantastic Four are discussing. The Fake Mister Fantastic kills some people in the base. Susan, which is with Mister Fantastic, is shocked about what Reed did. She doesn't trust him anymore. Mister Fantastic attacks Invisible Woman and they start fighing. Human Torch and The Thing also hear it and they come to him. Puppet Master is now also in the base, because Mister Fantastic send the location. He attacks the base with his puppets. The Thing and Alicia Masters start fighting against the puppets. Human Torch and Invisible Woman fight against Mister Fantastic. Humant Torch fires fire and Invisible Woman makes a bell The Fire goes in the bell and the bell flies to Mister Fantastic. The Bell explodes in front of the Fake Mister Fantastic. The fire goes on him. He burnes down and dies. Puppet Master saw it and attacks them with his Puppets. Franklin Storm also fights agains the Puppets. Invisible Woman, Human Torch, The Thing, Alicia Masters defeat all the Puppets in a long fight.

During the fight Mister Fantastic escapes from the cell where Puppet Master held him hostage. He goes outside where Doctor Doom is waiting for him. They start fighting. Doctor Doom uses his new power and is stronger than Mister Fantastic alone. Mister Fantastic and Doctor Doom go to the base where the other members of FF are fighting. They defeated Puppet Master. They want to take him hostage until Doctor Doom and Mister Fantastic come in the base. Doctor Doom uses his power to catch Franklin Storm. "Give Puppet Master to me, or otherwise Franklin will die" Doctor Doom says to them. They give Puppet Master to Doctor Doom. Doctor Doom lets Franlin Storm go, but on the last he kills him. Franklin Storm dies in the arms of Susan and Johnny. Doctor Doom and Puppet Master go away. Doctor Doom stil wants to search for the portal. Puppet Master is now an ally of Doctor Doom, He searches the Portal for Doom

In one of the last scenes of the movie, Puppet Master has find the portal, which Susan Storm created. Doctor Doom is glad and kills Puppet Master. Puppet Master has no work anymore, so that's why Doom killed him. Doom also steal his power. After this scene, Crimson, your scene will start.

FS and Crimson I hope you like my scene and put it in the movie. I hope it is not too long, you can also improve some things, if you want to.